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Mama lives in the dilapidated area of town,
With vulgar scribbles painted bright
onto the fading gray walls -

A result of teenage boredom that sets
in between exam stress and blind
expectations for pieces of paper
that society flaunts as decoratives.

The youngsters...
They never did care anyway
When they peed in the playground
Meant for the tots under five
Or displayed their limited repertoire
of descriptive words by
inking them onto the slides
with ugly black ink that only fades
through rain and time.

Their English teacher would probably
have torn her hair up in distress
upon finding out how her students
had modified the non-word, "fuck".

Substituting it in as
an    adjective,
a        noun,
a        verb,
            &
a    conjunction.


I digress.


Mama lives in the dilapidated area of town.
I tried to ask her to move out today -
But she refused.
Mama prefers decadence over order.
Because it gives her a reason to bitch
About something more worthwhile.
©2009 *taintedbliss
:icontaintedbliss:

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:) just something weird I came up with yesterday while on my way to grandma's in 109F weather.

Happiness is a choice. So is smiling despite wanting to frown & cry.

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:iconvierza:
sweet stuff. interesting thoughts to have floating in your head
:icontaintedbliss:
Thanks Papa Duckie :)

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Very well written :aww:

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:icontaintedbliss:
Thank you :)

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I like it!!! :D

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:icontaintedbliss:
Thank you :D

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Thank you :)

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This is quite different, and for me different is good. Too many so-called poets on dA take the sickening-sweet emotional route: moons are blue, love is all, everything is the same-old-same-old. This was an unusual subject and I really enjoyed the nontraditional way you made us think about "fuck" as an adjective, noun, verb, etc. Very clever! I could see that playground. I could feel your discomfort over older people living in the midst of this. Take a bow. This was an original in a world of copycats.

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